4 Oct: "The Pink Car" by Mark Halliday


The pink car is in my head.
It rolls calmly and calmly.
Across the carpet in 1957 and in my head.

Why is it pink? The question does not come up.
The pink car is just what it is and glad so.
Pink is its own color, of its own, being that.

(Pink not anything about sex
and not anything about femininity
and not anything about embarrassment or socialism
those meanings are from outside
whereas this pink car is not coming from an idea
it is a way of being itself.)

The pink car rolls slowly along a pale green lane
till it needs to go fast then it goes very fast
while still quiet. It knows what it is,
it is the pink car!

Along the lanes to be what it is
it goes around hard corners and far across a wide plain
and back again whenever it wants.

Other cars can be all those other colors
the pink car doesn't care they can be loud and big
the pink car doesn't care that is why it can roll
so quietly and go slow until it goes fast for awhile.

Other cars might honk their horns to seem big --
the pink car doesn't honk and doesn't worry
it just goes along the pale green lane
and around a sharp corner and down another lane
to stop in a special spot. Why is the spot special?
Because the pink car stopped there!

Stopping quiet but ready to go, to go
and be the pink car which is all it wants.
And when will I, when can
I ever be the man impied by this sedan?



Poem 005, Poetry 180 (note: this author was featured for 4-5 poems on our website list, but this does not appear to be one of them- even though we are getting familiar with his voice)

3 comments:

  1. It is difficult to not be beating to Aerosmith on this one :) One of the first "naughty" songs I realized I was listening to in junior high.

    The author is male, yet he chooses pink as a reference for this poem. The masculine-feminine balance...does he want to be "pink"? Is he already "pink"?
    So hard to let go of the stereotypes here.

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  2. The man envies the confidences he perceives the pink car to have. Is the pink car really this confident? Or is the man implanting his desires in pink car. Or maybe a time and place where none of the stigma or stereotypes were connected to his experiences.

    I like th freedom the pink car has; it must be nice

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  3. ngl man i kinda relate to the pink car

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