among a hundred other symptoms I wrote a poem called
"The Woman across the Shaft"—she was someone
I never met—she had long bare legs
on a summer night when she answered the phone
in her kitchen and lifted her legs to the table
while she talked and laughed and I tried to listen
from my window across an airshaft between buildings
and watched her legs. I doubt she was beautiful
but her legs were young and long
and she laughed on the phone
while I sat in my dark of dissolving faith
and I tried to capture or contain the unknown woman
in a poem: the real and the ideal,
the mess of frayed bonds versus untouched possibility,
so forth. Embarrassed now
I imagine a female editor
who received "The Woman across the Shaft"
as a submission to her magazine—the distaste she felt—
perhaps disgust she felt—I imagine her
grimacing slightly as she considers writing "Pathetic"
on the rejection slip but instead lets the slip stay blank
and then returns to another envelope
from a writer she has learned to trust,
crossing her long legs on her smart literary desk.
This is a small poetry club that started as a poetry email exchange between two friends. Our goal is to read a poem everyday, and this blog is one way to help keep us accountable. There is only one valid rule in poetry club: there are no rules in poetry club. Read any poem, in any order, with any or no interactions. You decide. We only suggest you read poetry!
Showing posts with label Regret. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Regret. Show all posts
8 Nov: "Legs" by Mark Halliday
In the last year of my marriage,
13 June: "Wheels" by Jim Daniels
Wheels
My brother kept in a frame on the wall pictures of every motorcycle, car, truck: in his rusted out Impala convertible wearing his cap and gown waving in his yellow Barracuda with a girl leaning into him waving on his Honda 350 waving on his Honda 750 with the boys holding a beer waving in his first rig wearing a baseball hat backwards waving in his Mercury Montego getting married waving in his black LTD trying to sell real estate waving back to driving trucks a shiny new rig waving on his Harley Sportster with his wife on the back waving his son in a car seat with his own steering wheel my brother leaning over him in an old Ford pickup and they are waving holding a wrench a rag a hose a shammy waving. My brother helmetless rides off on his Harley waving my brother's feet rarely touch the ground- waving waving face pressed to the wind no camera to save him.
—Jim Daniels
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