15 Sep: "Immortality" by Lisel Mueller

In Sleeping Beauty's castle
the clock strikes one hundred years
and the girl in the tower returns to the
world.
So do the servants in the kitchen,
who don't even rub their eyes.
The cook's right hand, lifted
an exact century ago,
completes its downward arc
to the kitchen boy's left ear;
the boy's tensed vocal cords
finally let go
the trapped, enduring whimper,
and the fly, arrested mid-plunge
above the strawberry pie,
fulfills its abiding mission
and dives into the sweet, red glaze.

As a child I had a book
with a picture of that scene.
I was too young to notice
how fear persists, and how
the anger that causes fear persists,
that its trajectory can't be changed
or broken, only interrupted.
My attention was on the fly;
that this slight body
with its transparent wings
and lifespan of one human day
still craved its particular share
of sweetness, a century later.

http://www.loc.gov/poetry/180/173.html

5 comments:

  1. I don't know about anger and fear persisting. The narrator speaks of fear as if it is a physical property. Like energy, it can not be created or destroyed, only transfered.

    And I don't remember sleeping beauty much, did everyone get frozen in time for 100 years or something?

    I like the last sentence. How a fly, or any specie, can desire something for what must feel like eternity compared to its normal life.

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    1. 100 years reference is in earlier versions of story, Disney made some changes

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  2. This poem was timed perfectly for my finishing of Anne Rice's "Sleeping Beauty" book 2. The rewriting of a fairy tale to suit the author's purpose...(in her case...EROTICA!!).

    Yes! From the Brothers Grimm:
    "At the christening of a king and queen's long-wished-for child, seven good fairies are invited to be godmothers to the infant princess. The fairies attend the banquet at the palace. Each fairy is presented with a golden plate and drinking cups adorned with jewels. Soon after, an old fairy enters the palace and is seated with a plate of fine china and a crystal drinking glass. This old fairy is overlooked because she has been within a tower for many years and everyone had believed her to be deceased. Six of the other seven fairies then offer their gifts of beauty, wit, grace, dance, song, and goodness to the infant princess. The evil fairy is very angry about having been forgotten, and as her gift, enchants the infant princess so that she will one day prick her finger on a spindle of a spinning wheel and die. The seventh fairy, who hasn't yet given her gift, attempts to reverse the evil fairy's curse. However, she can only do so partially. Instead of dying, the Princess will fall into a deep sleep for 100 years and be awakened by a kiss from a king's son."

    So much imagery here. A poem in motion...

    The last stanza makes the poem so powerful. As children we are able to be more present...fear and anger come and go....nothing holds. When do we start holding on to these types of memories? Again, human versus animal perception. The desire to have what humans don't have...more presence. This is one of my favorite themes from the poems that we have read thus far.

    In college I took a Children's Literature class that was stupendous. That may be a fun project sometime...the origins of some of the most widely known fairy tales, comparisons between countries, and how Walt Disney popularized a certain version out of them versus the Brothers Grimm who were definitely more GRIMM!

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  3. I don't know if there is much difference between human and animal perceptions. After all we are animals. We have a lot more awareness which makes us seem complex, yet when it comes down to it, we do what we do like animals.

    Isn't it interesting how poems can spark different ideas.

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    1. We both see conflicting views depending on the poem. That is a good sign. We are keeping our ideas open. Well you are; hopefully me too. Although I'm skeptical of certain ideas

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