Had we but world enough and time,
This coyness, lady, were no crime.
We would sit down, and think which way
To walk, and pass our long love’s day.
Thou by the Indian Ganges’ side
Shouldst rubies find; I by the tide
Of Humber would complain. I would
Love you ten years before the flood,
And you should, if you please, refuse
Till the conversion of the Jews.
My vegetable love should grow
Vaster than empires and more slow;
An hundred years should go to praise
Thine eyes, and on thy forehead gaze;
Two hundred to adore each breast,
But thirty thousand to the rest;
An age at least to every part,
And the last age should show your heart.
For, lady, you deserve this state,
Nor would I love at lower rate.
But at my back I always hear
Time’s wingèd chariot hurrying near;
And yonder all before us lie
Deserts of vast eternity.
Thy beauty shall no more be found;
Nor, in thy marble vault, shall sound
My echoing song; then worms shall try
That long-preserved virginity,
And your quaint honour turn to dust,
And into ashes all my lust;
The grave’s a fine and private place,
But none, I think, do there embrace.
Now therefore, while the youthful hue
Sits on thy skin like morning dew,
And while thy willing soul transpires
At every pore with instant fires,
Now let us sport us while we may,
And now, like amorous birds of prey,
Rather at once our time devour
Than languish in his slow-chapped power.
Let us roll all our strength and all
Our sweetness up into one ball,
And tear our pleasures with rough strife
Through the iron gates of life:
Thus, though we cannot make our sun
Stand still, yet we will make him run.
He speaks well of the the justification of lust he desires of this mistress. The whole poem I kept waiting for a sort of guilt, or regret, as usually comes in such position, and yet there was none except the guilt of waiting to act. There was decision...positive advantage of time.
ReplyDeleteWe always hear belief of the extension of love through and beyond the grave. I wonder what gives this author the opposing? That love will die? There is a different sense of urgency here...does the urgency that comes with such a lust differ from that he feels in his other relationship. Can both wives and mistresses die with the grave or only the one not taken advantage of?
How did this fit in with the book you read? Was the neauroscientist, too, in love, in lust? Questioning love after death? Wanting to take advantage of the time he had for a relationship, or "thing"?
I laughed at "vegetable love"...how oddly unique a description.
And "amorous birds of prey"...oh doesn't it feel so sometimes! Preying on each other...
What did you make of the last sentence? I didn't like it. A betrayal of life somehow....?
What if you read it as a joke? He it again sarcastically if you didn't yet.
ReplyDeleteThe hyperbole with time is great. Before the creation and after the conversion of the Jews (forever?). Then the quantities of the flattering is ridiculous. Flatter someone's eye for 60 seconds and see what happens. Then in the second section, time will end. "If we had..." Then it like let's just bang because we don't have enough time for all that excessive flattery from the first sections.
"then worms shall try
That long-preserved virginity,
And your quaint honour turn to dust,
And into ashes all my lust;"
This is probably the funniest part, or creepiest. We need to have sex before you die a virgin and worms get your vagina and my lust dies.
He acts like she wants it, coyness. She wants to be seduced and flatter (if not, this is such a misogynistic poem). Is he making a joke of the game of dating? Is she a powerful mistress? Is the joke poem showing that he knows her game and he is playing with her too?
The poem sounds good. The pacing, rhyme, and language are all well developed. I like the poem. I read it as a powerful mistress alluring the poet and he writes her a funny joke poem.
I don't remember the reference from the book. Probably had to do with the death reference? Maybe this one,
"And tear our pleasures with rough strife
Through the iron gates of life:
Thus, though we cannot make our sun
Stand still, yet we will make him run."
This gets back to a theme from the book. Living life. Making the best of our time. Live life while we have life.
Oh my word! Your response made me read this one entirely different. Especially the part about how the man wrote it and the woman allured...
ReplyDeleteAnd how animal instinct still prevailed in the end!!! And the worms....wow....
Reading poems through a "sexual" viewpoint is sometimes so much more entertaining. It reminds you how this world came to be...sexuality is EVERYWHERE!!! And the way things continue...it has to be seductive and coy and devious and pure. All of the good and bad and naughty and beautiful all rolled into one. Maybe all poems are ultimately about sex!!!
ReplyDeleteWe should try to write a poem called absolutely nothing about sex
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