As sweet as I could bear;
And once that seemed too much;
I lived on air
That crossed me from sweet things,
The flow of—was it musk
From hidden grapevine springs
Downhill at dusk?
I had the swirl and ache
From sprays of honeysuckle
That when they’re gathered shake
Dew on the knuckle.
I craved strong sweets, but those
Seemed strong when I was young;
The petal of the rose
It was that stung.
Now no joy but lacks salt,
That is not dashed with pain
And weariness and fault;
I crave the stain
Of tears, the aftermark
Of almost too much love,
The sweet of bitter bark
And burning clove.
When stiff and sore and scarred
I take away my hand
From leaning on it hard
In grass and sand,
The hurt is not enough:
I long for weight and strength
To feel the earth as rough
To all my length.
What a great poem to pair with yesterday's poem by Mr. Shelley.
ReplyDeleteThis narrator's paints a much more complex and interesting description of their lost love. I can relate a lot more with this explanation. How it feels almost too sweet or good. And the recovery lingers and dwells while you long for the love you lost.
Descriptive emotion from the very depths...so much MMMMMMMM, how does he write so honesty?
ReplyDeleteI adore this poem.
Welcome back AJ!
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