Advice from the Experts
I lay down in the empty street and parked
My feet against the gutter's curb while from
The building above a bunch of gawkers perched
Along its ledges urged me don't, don't jump.
My feet against the gutter's curb while from
The building above a bunch of gawkers perched
Along its ledges urged me don't, don't jump.
This is a strange poem.
ReplyDeleteWhy are the gawkers experts? Are the gawkers people or birds? Is the narrator laying in the street because he/she jumped already?
The verb tense is in the past. I like thinking of the birds as personified telling the person not to jump because he doesn't have wings and now they are up there gawking like, "we told you!"