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3 Apr: "Still When I Picture It the Face of God Is a White Man’s Face" by Shane McCrae

Before it disappears

on the sand his long white      beard before it disappears

The face of the man

in the waves I ask her does she see it ask her does

The old man in the waves      as the waves crest she see it does

she see the old man his

White     his face crumbling face it looks

as old as he’s as old as

The ocean looks

and for a moment almost looks

His face like it’s     all the way him

As never such old skin

looks my / Daughter age four

She thinks it might he might be real she shouts Hello

And after there’s no answer answers No

1 comment:

  1. Dang the four year old doesn't see it. The word old repeats a lot. The the waves crumble his face. Is the narrator loosing his faith in the old man white god?

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